Constructive Criticism/Plotty

[coyote_walking]

Anything you like or wish I was doing differently?

Questions you might have about Mercy?

Ideas you'd like to toss around?

Drop a note here or contact me as Maisfeeka on AIM.


Constructive comments only please - the whole 'more flies with honey' deal.

Comments

[watchthesock]

Hey there, just coming here with a bit of advice. Mercy does seem like an interesting character, one that I would like to know more about and tag with more often, but occasionally, your tags do seem a little challenging to respond to.

There's nothing wrong with shorter tags, but often, a one-line tag can be hard to respond to. Maybe consider trying to flesh out your tags with some of Mercy's introspection and thoughts, or add in some descriptors about how she's looking or feeling (happy? upset? thoughtful?), so that the people responding have something that their character can potentially pick up on and maybe add another dimension and direction to the thread.

Like I said, I enjoy seeing Mercy around, but I guess what I'm saying is that I'd like to see more of her personality showing through in her threads, if that makes sense.

[coyote_walking]

Will do!